Friday 2 June 2017

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The monstrous tree monster

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The monster/Lorena
The leaves/Lorena
The legs/Lorena
The brown branches/Lorena

   1       once upon a time there was a monstrous tree monster that lived in the forest all alone and it didn't have any friends. Her mum and dad  were in a cave fast asleep and she was looking for food and water. She was scared because the wolves were howling but she wasn't to scared because she has wolf blood in her so she howled and ran back home and set up the food on the table and the water in old cups. Her mum and dad woke up and filled up their cups with water.


2     The autumn leaves swished and swayed as the monstrous tree monster was running home, and went to sleep. The wind was setting in so the autumn leaves were swishing and swashing. Straight away the monstrous tree monster woke up and ran into the forest.  He was looking for his friends swish swish swish went  the leaves, “oh no what am I going to do i’m trapped” said the monstrous tree monster.While the leaves were getting everywhere the monstrous tree monster was getting tired from the leaves so it just collapsed. The mum and dad woke up and went searching for her.


3  After getting trapped she found a way out.”Oh no my legs look like wolf legs”cried the monstrous tree monster. While she was crying she heard a familiar sound but it was not one of the sounds she was waiting for. It was another monster that had the same legs as the monstrous tree monster.
Straight after that it said in a crying way “why do I have wolf legs, I look terrible like this” “ oh no what have you done to your legs sir” said the monstrous tree monster. “Well I was looking for my family in the woods and then I found this big big door that was the size of a giant’s door so I stepped in and found that my legs were like this 10 minutes ago, and that 10 minutes I was crying like you did and I never knew that there was another tree monster but there you are and I finally found another one” said the monstrous tree monster that was crying for 10 minutes. “Well well you don’t need to cry about your legs they look like you can run faster than me sir”.


4  After telling the beautiful story they both said together “hey you are getting something on your body” and it was branches.It was growing and growing and growing and then everything stopped for 10 seconds and then it released back as usual but something changed it was the branches that was different and this time it made the monstrous tree monsters much more fabulous than before, so they celebrated a festival and it was a very very good festival.



The end By Lorena